this is probably a little better that the last. again feel free to critque.
ehh this is kind of crap. but yeahh. please read and comment^-^ thank you
I found my hand written poetry not long ago and I just sat down to read it, so I'll be typing these old things up and give them a good polishing. This is one I wrote after my father died as we drove back from the funeral service.
Just a thought, perhaps a letter I'd wish to send someday.
Hyperbole and Poetic licensing may have taken hold in this poem. As a referendum I would like to apologize for anyone who was insulted by this piece of work. I respect religion, and I respect what it has done for the world. People have the right to choose whatever it is they wish to, so if you were offended, I once again offer my most sincere apologies.
Um I think this is a horrible poem but Ive been annoyed to post it by my friends...comment if youd like Id love to hear what you have to say...
Okay this is written by my boyfriend Alex Thomas and I. And personally I dont care if people dont like this...Its something we wrote together. Its one poem Im proud of. Comment if you want.