Challenge Poems.....
To help everyone out, I would love to offer a first "challenge " This came to me from my 14 yr old daughter, I did 2 of them and they come out pretty good.......
To help everyone out, I would love to offer a first "challenge " This came to me from my 14 yr old daughter, I did 2 of them and they come out pretty good.......
Well I tried it. Mind you I'm not in the clearest state of mind right now, but it was worth a try... Thanks for the challenge :)
I'm no poet, but I'll give it a shot... but I'll post it here, if you don't mind... I'd feel like only half of it would be mine (since it's already half written here)... so it wouldn't be fair to post it on my page... I think...
Ok people...NEW CHALLENGE..... "The Weird Al Challenge" D*mn, I wish I could find the one I wrote 5 years ago, I will have to redue and make the most of it...... Here's the challenge, Pick a song, any song and rewrite the lyrics or better still, "Mad-Lib" it (that seems to be the most humorus) if ur naturally not funny LOL...... I will have mine up this week after our birds are in.............kk, Have fun. All the Best, Shad.......
Oh yes, Shadowwriter! A must! It's also a lot easier to follow if done that way, sorry I left that prt out LOL Examples; Micheals Jacksons "Bad"....Weird Als "Fat" Madonnas "Like a Virgin"....Weird Als "Like a Surgeon" and so on.......All the Best, Shad
I'm still in a fist-fight against the previous challenge... I guess I'm gonna pass on the song... It's hard enough to reorganize my whole thought process to write in english without hitting my head against the music as well, hehe... But I'd love to read everyone else's leave me a message when you publish (nothing better than a nice laugh every now and then) :-)
Ok... it's not exactly "poetic"... It's a translation of something I originally wrote in spanish. But I think it's an easy task: Just like the one Shadow Rai made, use your cell phones, Loneliness 5663546377 69 5433 47 26 6736 96863 8428 76877 8626793733 33354647: 4 3335 76 566359 8428 6659 46 69 696 2667264667447 4 7325493 469 38379663 3573 32337 2929. 7246 272957 688 3766 69 4887 263 39487 9484 26 397567466 8428 782467 843 7453623 9484 2 337737283 727326.
Ok, I would love to say that I solved the whole d*mn thing but, I did'nt.......Here's what I got.... Loneliness My life is an open wound that pours unanswered feelings I feel so lonely that only in my own _____________ I realize how everyone fades away Pain crawls out from my guts and exits with an explosion that stain the silence with a scream. Help meeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Wow, you're fast. I'm publishing it right now. you just need "companionship" there in the line... everything else is an A+ I'm starting to think that that word might not even be the best for tha sentence... that's what happens with "flash translations" maybe if I change it to "company"? You see why I shouldn't play this game as a host? ...and... maybe it should've been "stains the silence", not "stain..."
I agree with the "stains" prt but, I would keep the "companionship" prt........Whoo hoo! This was cool, as soon as I recieved it, I didn't stop till I had most of it LOL.......Thanx for doing it hon......
To Billy Joels "Only the Good Die Young".........(Weird Al Challenge) D*mn It the Food
Alright, ahshadowrai, here's the attempt -- I did an easier song, Seal's "Kiss From a Rose", retitled, "Punch in the Nose". There stood in front of me a hugely muscled man staring at me, You beat me silly, letting me lay on the ground and bleed, Pain remained a drug that let me know I'm alive But did you know, that when it slows, My eyes become wide and that punch that you threw can be seen Bul-ly, I compare you to getting hit by a train, The more of you I get, Stronger it hurts, yow, And now that my nose is in pain, Your fist hits my nose like a train. There is so much a man can beat you, So much he can play, You remain, In power, having pleasure, my pain, bully To me you're like a growing affliction I can't deny. Wouldn't you say that's unhealthy, bully? But did you know, that when it slows, My eyes become wide and that punch that you threw can be seen Bul-ly, I compare you to getting hit by a train, The more of you I get, Stronger it hurts, yow, And now that my nose is in pain, Your fist hits my nose like a train. I've been punched in the nose by a train, I've been punched in the nose I've been punched in the nose by a train, And if I should fall on the ground and pray, I've been hit in the nose by a train ...been hit in the nose by a train {Repeat chorus to end of song]
Whoo hoo Orolon! I think this is soooo cool........I have to admit, I did'nt recall the song right off the bat but, you did such an excellent job, it all came right to me! lmao!!!!!!!!! Thanx hon............
ahshadowrai
Ok. here's the challenge....... "I am" poem, in this order add your own words Iam (two special characteristics about you) I wonder (something you're curious about) I hear (what you hear) I see (what you see) I want (what you want) I am (first line in the poem) I pretend (what you pretend) I feel (what you're feeling) I touch (something imaginary) I worry (about anything) I cry (about anything) I am (first line in poem) I understand (anything) I say (what ever you say) I dream (a dream of yours) I try (what are you trying?) I hope (what are you hoping for?) I am (first line in poem) And that's it! check out mine "I Am Sadly Creative" Enjoy............