edrapecor
edgar perez cordero
56 years old
Member since Jun 11, 2009
Writes from , Venezuela
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The seriously lacking grammar and punctuation made this an impossible read.
I am slightly confused...
Okay, very confused.
As lovely as it was... uhm... what IS it, exactly? A script? A short story?
The translation, if it is such, makes it difficult to read and understand.
-Chicory
I just wish I spoke more Spanish than I do.
BRAVO!!!! I really liked that, was a ittle confused in the beganning but i read the WHOLE thing and got lost in it. cant wait to read more =D