peacelovenstace

Stacy Politano

19 years old

Member since Jun 12, 2009

Writes from Keansburg, United States

Has read texts.

Has written 30 comments.

Hi :D
My name is Stacy. I am seventeen years old, and most of my life... I've only wanted one thing.
& that is to leave this earth and be known to the world, for my poetry. So I am posting my work here in hopes that it will rise me up and make that dream, reality.
Writing makes me who I am, and I want my children, my childrens' children, my parents & siblings, old enemies, people who never thought I'd do anything with my life, and complete strangers to know I have dreams...
Goals that I'd kill so they could be accomplishments...
And I will never give up on my dreams.
All I've ever wanted.. is to be published.
Please check out my work :D I'll return the favor.
Enjoy.

These are the comments on peacelovenstace's work

ordinary_girl

Written Dec 31 2009, 09:45 AM in I Am A Lover

holy crap this is awesome! keep writing, i think this is one of my favourites i've read on this site xx

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xxmusiccrazyxx

Written Dec 20 2009, 02:09 PM in Elements

Thats so how i feel about me and this one guy right now. ITs beautiful and perfect!

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naomilinn

Written Dec 19 2009, 04:13 PM in Elements

"Leave every person astounded,
Because it can only be done by you & me"
loved that line^^^
i liked this poem!

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bittersweet

Written Oct 09 2009, 07:33 PM in Dissolving Right Before My Eyes

Great last line, it really brought the whole piece to a very final sounding conclusion.
Memories and people always fade away, and things do change, but just becuase you cannot recal the face or the voice of a person clearly doesn't mean you've forgotten them.

-B

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chicory

Written Sep 29 2009, 06:00 PM in With Open Eyes

It feels almost feminist to me. Like the "fire" of modern life is killing what is sacred and feminine within the soul, chasing away or killing what is wild and natural.

Just a thought...

-Chicory

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naomilinn

Written Sep 27 2009, 08:04 AM in Real Eyes, Realize, Real lies.

i like it! that was so amazing. loved every word. i love how you used a 5 word quote and turned it into something even more beautiful.
^-^

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ordinary_girl

Written Sep 25 2009, 01:49 PM in Good Morning, Good Night.

adored it.
awesome job.

-OG
x

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bittersweet

Written Sep 25 2009, 07:51 AM in Mother Nature.

I enjoyed that. Your use of similies and metaphores worked well
However, I feel that the end was much to abrupt. You kind of.... forced it. Let it flow, end when it feels natural, no matter how long the poem becomes, instead of a forced, unnatural ending.
The use of the flower was very... symbolic. Becuase when we think nature, the first thing that comes to mind is plants, especially flowers.

-B