Stacy Politano (peacelovenstace)

peacelovenstace

Stacy Politano

19 years old
Member since Jun 12, 2009
Writes from Keansburg, United States
Has read texts.
Has written 30 comments.
Hi :D
My name is Stacy. I am seventeen years old, and most of my life... I've only wanted one thing.
& that is to leave this earth and be known to the world, for my poetry. So I am posting my work here in hopes that it will rise me up and make that dream, reality.
Writing makes me who I am, and I want my children, my childrens' children, my parents & siblings, old enemies, people who never thought I'd do anything with my life, and complete strangers to know I have dreams...
Goals that I'd kill so they could be accomplishments...
And I will never give up on my dreams.
All I've ever wanted.. is to be published.
Please check out my work :D I'll return the favor.
Enjoy.

These are the comments on peacelovenstace's work

Naomi Scheel

naomilinn

Written Aug 28 2009, 02:50 PM in False Hope

"Perplexed by you and me,
but I'll hold this rope.
Slipping into this illusion,
farther and farther down."

"Tick Tock Tick Tock...
Running out of time.
Eyes on the clock,
As I continue to climb.
Give me something
to hold onto please."

those were my 2 favorite parts. this almost sounded like a song to me. ever think of song writing?
great job :D

Erika Campbell

chicory

Written Aug 25 2009, 07:17 AM in Feeling

I really liked this piece, especially the first stanza, all except for this line--"The feeling of this feeling is fresh." I don't know, but I've never been a fan of repeat words within a line.

Thanks for sharing!

-Chicory

Jane Lottermain

realcoolperson

Written Aug 07 2009, 07:03 PM in The Sky Awakes

I looooove!! It totaly sounds like something Ive read before, though.... oh well!! I think you did a good job, anyways, ps this is from Harrig, btw 'suck a dick bitch'

Tony Gilmore

tonygilmore

Written Aug 04 2009, 11:10 PM in The Sky Awakes

I Like :D

Tessa Knight

beast_of_burden

Written Aug 02 2009, 08:02 PM in The Sky Awakes

I really enjoyed this, and you should have more faith in yourself and what your good at, you shouldnt let others opinions shape you or depend so much on them. I understand that a comment is nice, but if you truely believe in yourself and your talent you wont [need] others opinions.

Hohepa Ellis

potentialthreat

Written Jul 31 2009, 11:46 PM in CHECK

I like your stuff aswell, I'll comment more on your poetry, if youd like, but its better you don't ask people too. sorry.

Tessa Knight

beast_of_burden

Written Jul 31 2009, 11:33 PM in CHECK

You know, you really shouldnt do that crap-Its annouying and I usually really like your stuff but you just let yourself down.

Megan Sparks

stargazer93

Written Jul 20 2009, 12:43 PM in It's My Heart

Sounds like something I would write!! jk =D Good work!!

Naomi Scheel

naomilinn

Written Jul 20 2009, 08:02 AM in It's My Heart

hey. this is REALLY good. i wish guys would understand what they do to us poor girls.

Spencer H

anon_amarth

Written Jul 18 2009, 04:18 PM in It's My Heart

Good poem. I like the message as it is something most everyone can relate to. It's probably something everyone has gone through at one point or another in there life.