Amber Johnson (crimson76)

crimson76

Amber Johnson

22 years old
Member since Sep 28, 2009
Writes from , United States
Has read texts.
Has written 52 comments.
Ok, I haven't been on here in a while.. bad me lol. I've just been really busy with school and work and trying tot figure myself out a little.

Soooo. Most of what you see that is rather morbid and a bit violent/angry is likely from the first bunch of poems that I ever wrote (don't you just love high school?). I was really hesitant to post them but I figured what the heck! This my art, and there is no need for me to hide it from anyone anymore. I do not intend to ever act on any of the things described in those poems and I centrally don't condone them.

Right now I am in the long process of trying to branch out to different things. To learn new stuff, see what I need to work on poetry wise (and life wise lol). I always draw and dable with photography once in a while. If you are interested in any of that stuff, send me a private message please =)

These are the comments on crimson76's work

Naomi Scheel

naomilinn

Written Dec 10 2009, 05:51 PM in September

i loved this so muchh.
i think it was just fine the way it is.
*relate relate*!
^-^

Naomi Scheel

naomilinn

Written Dec 10 2009, 05:47 PM in Numb again

"They tell me what you did
They say how you always lie
I just nod while they go on
As I strain against the urge to scream"
i loved that part, can relate. amazing^-^

Nurse Nancy

seamom

Written Dec 10 2009, 11:27 AM in September

someone you have ambivalent feelings about has a birthday in September?

Elizabeth Willow

bittersweet

Written Oct 09 2009, 07:36 PM in Windows to the Changing Seasons

Hmm, the idea behind this piece was great, however, the repetition of a couple words throughout the poem didn't sit well with me in the way it flowed. Try employing a thesaurus, get some synomnyms going.

-B

Amber Johnson

crimson76

Written Oct 09 2009, 01:06 PM in Red Grout Daze (Long)

lol "deliciously dark"... i like the sound of that. thank you ^.^

Elizabeth Willow

bittersweet

Written Oct 08 2009, 07:44 AM in Watching Crimson Rivers

I liked the reppetition that tied your first stanza to your last.
Very effective. The phrase "crimson rivers" really creatives a vivid picture for the reader.
Well done.

-B

Elizabeth Willow

bittersweet

Written Oct 08 2009, 07:38 AM in Red Grout Daze (Long)

oooo, I really liked that.
Very morbid, eerie, creepy, deliciously dark.
Sorry, I get excited when a poem works really well.

-B

Naomi Scheel

naomilinn

Written Oct 07 2009, 06:00 PM in Watching Crimson Rivers

whoa that was good. i certainly don't wanna get on your bad side now. lol.
nice work^-^

Harlequin Six

jump

Written Oct 06 2009, 11:14 PM in Red Grout Daze (Long)

I don't think you messed it up at all.
You might even get away with adding another stanza
And you're right, it was pretty morbid..

Erika Campbell

chicory

Written Sep 29 2009, 05:27 PM in Blue Eyes Crying

A favorite, what more can I say?

Your best work, in my humble opinion.

-Chicory