You know I write to show everything I can't say. Sometimes I wish I was a bit more outgoing but its cool. My poems are each a piece of me. They give me a sense of letting myself go. There are days where all I do is write depending on whats going on. They are hugely impacted by my heart. Enjoy!
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I like the second one so I think I am going to change it to that :) thanks for the suggestion!
"The Casted Shadow of a Brilliant Star"
or
"The Unwanted Silver Thorn of a Rose"
I have read the whole poem...
I think this titles may best suit it,but it's just a suggestion
If you have given this art to the one it is really inspired,
then that's great
hoping it may soothe the hidden depths of your heart:)
"Flow,flow through depths sweetest reap
By shadows left,the darkest being
Mend those bitterest scars adeep
by promise unbroken,by heaven's wing"
-it's nice but try this
and hope it touches the heart to whom it was addressed to..
I'd have put something like:
"and maybe if you open your eyes
Then you can finally see
That I need to apologise
'Cause you mean too much to me"
But I like what you've got :)
i really enjoyed this poem i can relate to it!
whoa i totally relate to this right now. well we havn't broken up yet, but i'm afraid we might for the exact same reason. i loved this. favorited^-^
"my heart lets you out the back door"
That was an amazing little line right there. And the whole thing was awesome. Well done :)
aww this is sad, but sweet still. a nice story in there i think :)