syntax350
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16 years old
Member since Dec 21, 2009
Writes from Houston, Texas, United States
Has read texts.
Has written 150 comments.
I am just another hypocritical fag on the internet.
I am just another hypocritical fag on the internet.
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"The cowards will recover in shadows while sun burnt faces continue a indirect proposition, feel that pulse fade away and let a whisper be the rest of your maze."
The entire piece was good..
-this line was great.
Funny, but explanitory.. just another little life hick.... :(
Without god there is not religion, without religion there is not war. A lowly man is much more than a god anyday. You are a very empowering person.
random is a tsunami hitting japan, this is as exciting as a few thousand drowning peasants... detestably humourous......
.... unimpressed o.o
I like this I chuckled at it
I don't know if it's serious or not, but it's just so random
I like the juxtaposition of covering eyes to see and ears to hear. I always find the senses to be an element that can be drawn upon.
It was a sad subject matter, but aspects rang true.
as usual, a yawn enducing read.... and btw, Im not sure lil wayne cares about you rantings on the internet ( he can probably make a hoe moan ) as would nobody with LESS than a shred of self respect..... *yaaawwwwn... your no threat to any one! I just, i just find it hard to believe that you actualy post all of this bullshit! :b some people actualy enjoy writing REAL poetry! Take the coolest guy you know for example ( me ) ok?? awww, you alright >:F
It is with great pleasure that I award you the honor of being Tony Toucherman's STAR of the week. There is absolutely nothing of interest in this poem and you win the I-BORED-TONY-TO-DEATH prize. Congratulations