wats love may i ask is it the beating of ur heart or the life burning in ur soul witch comes first wat comes last do they come separate or as a pack do they come single or as a whole
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I like and agree with your idea of the future. Awesome^-^
The poem might be a little more serious if you would replace the 'u' and 'ur' with actual words. They sound like they could be lyrics or something part of a bigger piece. :)
this is really interesting. I loved it. Great job.
I liked this a lot. I think it's spelled "despair" but don't worry about it.
Anywho, very good.
really liked it please do continue would love to read more
This was still good, but I liked your other one better^-^
