Every Decision ive made in my life was the Right decision to make at the time, I never did a thing i didnt have to do.....No matter how wrong it might have seemed... i played the cards i was dealt and did my best to come out.... i just feel bad about the people who Lost....
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I love it. The root of pain and anger and lies. Is knowing its ther and fighting that shit with love and truth.
I thought this was amazing. I really didn't notice too many spelling mistakes, and so what;you still got your point across. Great :D
I luuuuV it.!
But pleaz don't hurt no one else.its naked truth of feelings and the love you have for your sanity.!!!Applause!!!
This is a very strong piece. But,
You use excellent language, and then on the other hand you make small spelling and Grammar mistakes that take away from the effect, and confuse the meaning.... I think the work itself is very powerful - your statement is clear, you took a direction and brought it home in the end. I would not have chosen to include the dedication in the poem itself - but it worked. Impressive.