i have all these ideas i want to express, but can never seem to do so articulately in conversations
my poems consist of my unspoken words, so to speak
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Curiosity often leads me into the van of an elderly man.
Now's your time
your moment to shine
Show me your god
and I'll show you Mine
Probably my favorite part. Good job!
quite intriguing really. i also like the undertone much.
Very good write,
It is love that builds good memories of family, and friends as we move through time,if I would write a poem like yours it would be of happy times shared and the good memories that now are a part of me forever
beauty , this is call a beauty writing , i realy like this ....
Regards
Rakesh Kr.
(claps hands) that was quite amazing! loved it
wow. I don't have much more to say than "wow". Did you ever think about showing this poem to its subject/inspiration?
