sojourner
Robert Ditchman
72 years old
Member since Mar 04, 2010
Writes from Mentor on the Lake, United States
Has read texts.
Has written 81 comments.
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This is really beautiful. Makes me think about when you perceive love, you see it as a fairytale, but in reality it is not.
Wow I thought the words you used in thios poem were awesome!
I'd make the last paragrah "And let tomorrow never come" because come matches the word sun at the end making it ryhme better. ANyways I loved this poem and thought the first paragraph was the best of all of them :) Rock on!
It's interesting how this poem is almost a mixture of life and death. The hurt and feelings of death with the water as life and hopes things will improve.
aww thats so true. it helps if someone is there to listen
this was amazing...it flowed awesome...i dont even have the right words just wow :)
this was amazing ^.^
i wish i had someone there for me like thattt.
Now here's a poem you could stick in a book(s). Great poem ;)
i really really liked this. :D i hope you figure out what the mirror displays. (if that sounds correct)
