My life keeps getting worse, and I so slightly want to breathe in the cyanide of my own depression
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great poem i can feel the broken heart still beating
I like this poem.... But I hate the feeling portrayed.... :P
Nothing more relieving than opening up. Thank you for sharing.
-Chicory
"I gave you my heart the first day I said “I love you”,
I would have given you my soul but it was no longer with me,
Taken from me by cold hands that struck me over and over again." these lines are amazing. i really admire the way you tell things like they are. these are amazing
This is very dark, but in a great way. Brilliant.
But don't commit suicide, pleaseandthankyou.
Hatred.....consuming even the purest of hearts....
anyway,the emotions are well perceived
it will love again for sure:)) that was nice..
"Taken from me by cold hands that struck me over and over again"
Favorite part up there, nice job!^-^
I totally agree with the idea of the whole poem
and nice wordings..
