My life keeps getting worse, and I so slightly want to breathe in the cyanide of my own depression
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"She fell down and heard nothing but voices,
Saw nothing but darkness,
And felt nothing but emptiness and misery."
this is my fave line....
Nice job! You had the scene playing in my mind from the first sentence..... :)
Very moving! It actually made me cry! It's amazing!
This one was loooong! but it was good :D
"Your eyes are like two oceans of emeralds that glitter in the sun." ←←← I like this line alot.
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Yes I do like this line alot.
I also like manatees :D
