Susan Notman (smilecity)

smilecity

Susan Notman

23 years old
Member since Mar 16, 2010
Writes from , United Kingdom
Has read texts.
Has written 18 comments.
Hey, my name is Susan,

I haven't been writing long but I love it when poems just come to you and you have to grab the moment and write them down before you forget.
I feel writing poems is an amazing way to express your feelings that you dont have a chance to say, or are not brave enough to.
I would really appreciate feedback, Positive and negative
Thank you xxx

These are the comments on smilecity's work

Alexandra B

zan

Written Jun 20 2010, 10:02 AM in Let you go!

Simple format, nice meaning. Gets a lot across.

Andrew Gallardo

chiyan

Written Apr 13 2010, 11:17 PM in I love it!

What great memories,haha

Andrew Gallardo

chiyan

Written Apr 13 2010, 11:16 PM in Why do we die, and live in the sky?

It is very emotional and I saw the emotions pushing through though it did not have any rhyme scheme

Still lovin' it

Erika Campbell

chicory

Written Apr 13 2010, 06:27 PM in Why do we die, and live in the sky?

Read it. Didn't hit my heartstrings this time.

Thanks for sharing though.

-Chicory

Erika Campbell

chicory

Written Apr 13 2010, 10:05 AM in Im NOT sorry for what i said!

Kick their mean butts!!


You've got a style, stick too it!

Good job with this one.

-Chicory

Erika Campbell

chicory

Written Apr 13 2010, 10:04 AM in Left open

I like the way you express emotion, it's very real and people can relate to it seamlessly.

-Chicory

Erika Campbell

chicory

Written Apr 13 2010, 10:01 AM in I love it!

How sweet!

I feel like it ended a little too quickly, but other than that it was nice.

-Chicory

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syntax350

Written Apr 03 2010, 02:22 AM in Nobody knows because I don’t share.

Maybe some chocolate fudge will make the lonely girl feel better.

MaryaM Mantash

maryam_mantash

Written Mar 26 2010, 10:12 AM in Late at night

i like such kind of poems,,, aweet and simple..thumbs up ! keep on writing =)

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syntax350

Written Mar 20 2010, 01:04 AM in Smile for everything is worthwhile

I liked this one.

:)