"It's Easy to Love a Broken-Hearted... But it Was Never Easy For a Broken-Hearted to Love..."
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you're my master........masterpeter
nice words and rhyming....
anyway,i'll finish my poem about an eye later this night....when the stars and the moon will rise for me to make a poem
Hey, I just put what my heart says, so I guess, it would be only me who could appreciate this, and sorry for posting a rubbish, sorry for telling what my heart says. It proves to you that I'm a simple-minded guy. Again, sorry for posting a rubbish,
PS. I never forced you to read this poem, so don't blame me if it wasted some of your precious time. thanks for the comments.
I know it may be funny,
but i know it's you, really.
I know those criticisms may feel so hard,
But i know you'll not be like broken glass shards.
For i know you and you know me.
Form that poem, i know what you feel.
I know that it it may sound cheesy,
but for you it can be painful, probably.
for this comment you will see,
that i understood the poem by thee.
It's from your no doubt, i know,
Your my friend, this comment can show.
OK, this poem is practicaly every love story rolled into one, its not that orignial and is very cliche. Unfortunatly I have to agree with realcoolperson because I did laugh when I read this. But please, dont take this personally, keep writing if it makes you happy, I just find it a shame that I have so many bad things to say to a person I dont even though, because of a poem I only just read.
And I believe its SIR.
Ps, very cheesy.
yeah sorry shyguy but this did nothing for me... infact, its was VERY cliche and almost even more ridiculously cheesy, unfortunatly, I dont have any power whatsoever to destroy this embarrasment and send you over to Naam where cloth heads can shoot you and the very paper this fowl writing was there-by produced. However, thankfully, I CAN forget I know anything about it and save the world a little more space, and time if you ask me, because I just wasted time reading this rubbish and Ive just so auspiciously realised that Im wasting time critiquing it aswell, because no dought you will probably continue writing the very first thoughts that come off your head.
So in the end, even though I know nothing about you, from this I can tell you have an extremely simple way of thinking, as seen from your "every line must rhyme with the one previous to" style and your "four lines to every paragraph" structure. If I could see you at the moment, I would laugh until my head turned purple just to show you that the living can only laugh at you so much, and whom ever might be beyond you have just cursed to eternal laughter.
Good day Miss.
ha,we're of the same kind,my friend..
but through our works,we may let the suffocating feelings go
another great work
sabi ku na nga ba taksil ka peter eh
kea di ka pinapansin eh
pilitin mu kse!
lagi ka nln nasa likod ng mga pangyayari eh
(anung meaning nun?)
