rynn
Marconi Elisabeth
24 years old
Member since Feb 16, 2006
Writes from Klausenburg, Romania
Has read texts.
Has written 8 comments.
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Eloquent language, ritmic verses. images like "sad miracles" make me dreamy, wondering.
Mi piace. Je l'aime. Yo tengo gusto de el. Ich mag es.
wow, this is amazing, at times a bit confusing but really well written and organized. great thoughts on how we have become a "Brave New World that has such people in it" Nichole PS: seems you're interested in the nuclear age, and the demoralizing effect of telivision from looking some of the titles to your poems, like Chernoble.)
this is my favourite of what i have read of your work so far. 'There sings the arch-dandy on this stage so shiny Next to deformed bodies and broken statues; Street clowns give up their souls willingly To gain money made out of skins depicting virtue.' i think it is brilliant. i may have to come and read it again.:)
Hi-you sure have a lot of words here-I'm not sure if I understand where you are going. How about a little more info? Are you a big Jim Morrison fan? his is kind of his style
you are so talented. i love your use of words. from the start to the end it was just perfect.
it is very thought provoking, and the first poem i have read on this site. :) i adore long poems, especially this one.
This poem grabbed me from the first line and took me on a roller-coaster ride all the way to the end. Excellent write.
