hmm....
Making an idea to reality,
Can be, but most, not be,
When done, can be great achievement,
For what it can do or what can it serve.
(btw, do not expect me to write comments coz sometimes i'm to lazy to write one.)
I accept criticisms, feel free to comment.
Criticisms can help me improve my works!!
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I totally love the beginning...it's catchy
and I strongly think you're improving pretty fast....
talented being
hmm, well i guess the last line was not that good...i can't think of rhyming word that can hold the same meaning on the last line.
i love this it's dark, sad, beautiful and true u have a talent the only thing i would work on is the end it looks like it shuold god on to some thing elss but dosent thoe im no beter my self just a bit of addvie other then that it realy good and im going to add it to my fav's
tis' is great.....
incredible talent+experience+precious time makes your poems
nice,improving....
looking out for more
I think i have both the angel and the devil inside me...
:P haha
hey that's a really nice one...containing a good meaning... :)
Nice work..
Ne'er thought you got the religous side...
looking forward for more