erinheartspoems
Erin Murphy
14 years old
Member since Jun 01, 2010
Writes from , United States
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Has written 140 comments.
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White walls,
Leaving me with the girl in my reflection,
Immense pity,
Aimed in my own direction
Starving lungs,
Finding release in every breathe,
Pained heart,
Fearing loneliness till death
Passion so fierce,
You put eternity to shame
The love pursuit,
Its a wild animal you'll never tame
These were my absolute favourite lines, I almost cried with happiness and sadness :') I think youre a great writrer with this as my proof, added to favourites!
WOW! I really really like this one! (this may sound like it's obvious but does "too be continued" mean there will be a second part to it?) I really like it! :) P.S. you mis spelt Throne in the beginning. But that's the only flaw, keep up the good work :)
I can so relate to the last one
Like this, quite a lot actually.
Reminds me of a song♥
this is really good...it could actually go on and on. you should listen to 'when she cries' by Britt Nicole.
lol, lespaul :) that is funny - keep up the good writing EHP !
Sorry about all the spelling errors I was using an iphone and it changed what I originally wanted to say (for example: read and comment hahahah) but you know lespaul I never asked u to read it. I really don't give a shit if you ever read or comment on another one of my poems again because actually, I'd prefer that. See you disliked my poem I see, but instead of either shutting up about it and moving on, or giving me some feed back on how to improve from here on, u made fun of my spelling? wowsers. mkay. thats cool. anyways thank y'all for ur comments&advice :)
