bekkahbaby
rebekkah clancy
15 years old
Member since Jun 26, 2010
Writes from chesterfield, Virgin Islands (U.S.)
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i never considered my self a emo or emu as my niece corrects, but with a name like bekkah baby , makes me think that you are not what you want to be , I used to cut myself outa rage and i didn't want to hurt someone eles so i would pick me ,,,,, i was 9 then and all it really did was leave ugly scars that one day when you are in a new stage of your life will have to a. make up excusses or lies to how they got there or B be truthfull to lets say your own children .... and tell them what a fucken joke you where was when you where younger and had to do what all your emu buddys where doing . but mommy is that what makes one themselfs ? Mommy should i do the same so people will pay attention to me ,,,, is that the only way you will love me mommy> now bekkah baby take this how you want but life never stays the same so whatever harm you do to your self is all your choice , but in real world either you do it correct or you cutt and may feel good then and while you play the game of hiding it from everyone and then the drama when some one does find it will go away one day you have a great writing abilltiy dont waste it on scars get to know u and if you are still a cutter then sooo be it cause hounestly i have as an adult cut my self when i was pissed ,,, but i just never told any one >
I loveloveloved this poem and well it can relate to so many ppl.... nice job! :))
it's ohkay,
just remember not to try too hard to ryme.
it has potential ;D
This was really good. One of the best poems I've read in a long time from a new author.
Forget how you memorised his walk
Forget the way he use to talk
Forget the things he use to say
Remeber that hes gone away
Forget his laugh' Forget his grin
Forget the dimples on his chin
That was my fav part of it n i love how u put ur emotions into the poem and how it showed how u reali feel bout him n how it showed the struggle of all girlzz 2 get over an ex we all have 2 4get those things n its not the easiest thing 2 do
ilove this poem
this was really great.
i liked how you rymed everything, and i normally dont like ryming poems.
i also liked how you put anger in it. and your emotions.
but it's remember** not remeber o.o
