maddie
maddison Reddie
22 years old
Member since Feb 18, 2006
Writes from perth, Australia
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I find nothing wrong with sobriety, but that is because I haven't experienced much of the other end of the spectrum. I enjoed the humor but I too wish there had been punctuation, at times it would have aided my reading.
twill.
i wish you used punctuation, but you didn't =[
haha
and what's wrong with sobriety?
oh my goodness.
I love this.
its actually
perfect.
so intensely true, I've thought it all myself, but have always just babbled about it in a way that no one could understand, never been willing/able to put it down in poetry.
I applaud you.
This poem made me stop breathing for a while.
-ve
very well written, however I perceive it as a far too jaded take on love which is a many splendored thing.