orolon
Sonny Harman
25 years old
Member since Feb 19, 2006
Writes from Lancaster, United States
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Has written 150 comments.
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me too, I feel like I can relate to this.
wow, I guess you really are a romantic, then but not a hopeless one, just a good one, your poem made me chuckle a bit though, it's pretty good, excellent I should say.
"But I know your heart belongs to someone you've yet to meet Someday you will be loved" Someday You Will Be Loved- Death Cab For Cutie I know how you feel. Wait and hope. You'll meet her.
I love this one. It really speaks to me. I like your poems, and I give you 2 thumbs up!
Awww, I loved every word!, what a refreshing piece of work (sigh) "Baby, you're the greatest!" O_-- (wink)
that was awesome! i really like how you have written through the child's eyes - its a very original idea! I love how near the end, when Cid was at the preschool, how he was going off insitinct - the red was the right crayon. Very sweet.
i like this poem alot...i like how the way you wrote was sortof dreamlike in its own way.
Super passionate hon, I love the "boldness and power in this "Until the stars fail and fall from the sky, Until the oceans drown the mountains, Until the universe gives way to a single man." Amazin' how you came up with a fantastic way to word this (the crowd goes wild) Brilliant
Hey! Thankyou for returning the favour on my poems - but woh, did you ever! hehe I didnt expect anyone to read and comment on as many as you did and, I want to let you know just how appreciated it was. It has made my day :) thankyou very much. I have come here half to return some of the huge favour you did for me, and because I enjoyed your last poem and hoped to see more. I don't have much time (I never do) but I have read this poem, and I can honestly say that I enjoyed this one just as much as the last. Being that I read about a dreamer in one, and a lonely heart in another, both poems have something to do with the other. Dreamers tend to be loners, and inside they may wish to have someone with them - but it's that wish that starts them dreaming... Well atleast that's my thoughts on the matter. Anyway, great poem, sad and very well written. Thankyou again, and keep writing :)