orolon

Sonny Harman

25 years old

Member since Feb 19, 2006

Writes from Lancaster, United States

Has read texts.

Has written 150 comments.

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ahshadowrai

Written Apr 30 2006, 03:48 PM in Loathing of the Self

This is a fine piece hon, the "motif" is one truely some can realate too, awesome job w/the rhythmic flow. I lost it some though w/ "I just watch my life in decline." I would take out the word "in" it would hold to the rythem better, otherwise, another excellent one from you!

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christian

Written Apr 30 2006, 02:29 PM in Loathing of the Self

Wow this is really great.I can relate in everyway love it.kudos

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icegrl

Written Apr 30 2006, 02:24 PM in Mixture

very creative and expressive, i like it

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christian

Written Apr 30 2006, 02:23 PM in Dreamers Girl

Orolon this is really good well.Kudos

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icegrl

Written Apr 30 2006, 02:07 PM in Loathing of the Self

I really like this... I can relate in a way.

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stormydaze

Written Apr 30 2006, 12:32 PM in Rage in Writing (Amor Omnia Vincit)

Wow, that was amazing.......

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meandmyself

Written Apr 30 2006, 07:51 AM in The Blossoming of a Dream

I like this one alot. I understand this one completely. I like most of your writing, but this is one of my favorites.

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stefhy

Written Apr 30 2006, 04:13 AM in The Blossoming of a Dream

Well, I have nothing to say except...Wow! That was excellent. This is actually the third poem I have run into about dreaming (I've been searching for them specifically and I'm so glad to see them. They took forever to find! - which just proves that it's quite original hehe.) I really loved the words you used, I was pulled in right from the beginning when you said 'trespassers'. I'm not quite sure, but it was then that I started being 'wowed' (so to speak). Great job!