I'm one of the 'old gang' of Deliricans. My writing is a way for me to disentangle myself, and follow my instinctual preferences.
Happy reading :)
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What were you remembering???? That was really good!!!!
This is really good! short and to the point.......yet it flows beautifully...... could you read my poems? give some critics and commments?
Wow, this is brutal. Really quite effective. Christ!
Jesus H. Christ.
I honest to God forgot how amazing you truly are.
Your poetry amazes me.
You write with such skill and grace and poise.
Amazing poem,
once again.
In fact,
favorites.
I'm thinking that this could be part of a much bigger story. You know how sometimes teachers assign one sentence that doesn't mean much and ask you to write a whole chapter about it? That's what this makes me think. I really like it.
Um,
I am so confused by this..
and I couldn'tr love it more.
Oh geez.
I forgot how amazing of a writer you are.
This was really great.
I don't really think that I took it the way other people did,
but maybe I was just concentrating on how well it was written.
I thought I'd get comments about religion, but thank you all very much for them all the same. This isn't about having faith in a God, but a person. I guess that isn't very obvious though, and you can read it any way you like. No - I don't think I've heard of Anis Mojgani, who is that? I don't remember using bric-a-brac much before, but I probably did at least once :P
I could swear I remember you using "bric-a-brac" quite often... perhaps before the crash? Anyways, this poem made me start think of a bunch of things ( maybe I'm still tired )... have you heard of Anis Mojgani?
I dont' think i have a big enough vocabulary to really tell you what I think, it's hard to believe that me,, I actually thought of something, but I agree faith is important to make your fears vanish