Andres Visbal (liiberar)

liiberar

Andres Visbal

19 years old
Member since Nov 05, 2007
Writes from Richmond, Canada
Has read texts.
Has written 178 comments.
My poetry: It is what it is. I have to admit not even I understand one hundred per cent of it, as a lot/all of the words come to me little by little when I lose track of my mind. So I really appreciate it when people give their own interepretations ( hint hint! ).

My poetry has gone through many phases over the four years I've been writing, and even still, I constantly try to grow more as a poet. Most of what I now write is intended to be slam poetry ( i.e, meant to be performed up on a stage with my hands flailing wildly around me ). The audio files are so you can hear what it's supposed to sound like; I definately think it gives a very different impression.
( Just a disclaimer of sorts, not all my poetry is about my actual life, so try not to take ALL of it seriously. )

I've been here for a while. Old account was x__liberar from before the "big crash", if you want to see what's left of my crappy old poetry for some reason.

These are the comments on liiberar's work

Brandon Le

thebleed

Written Feb 12 2010, 04:50 AM in V - Unravel

great story and great use of spanish

Ruben Belizaire

ruben92b

Written Jan 05 2010, 07:14 PM in "Like lights in the Dark,..."

Loved it

"Like lights in the Dark,
we are small and flickering
( some shining very brightly through ) the pathways
and like fireflies"

favorite line ^^

G L

redrockingchair

Written Dec 14 2009, 08:53 PM in "Like lights in the Dark,..."

very beautiful poem. very good ending verse :D

M B

pintsize

Written Nov 11 2009, 07:58 PM in Les vieillards m'ont parlé des miracles

mmm. love it.
"Letters from a dying atheist, Summer.
Dear Eugenia, wife.
You never seemed to fail me in life, but my kidneys sure did.
Goodbye!

Sunflowers sprouted from the open sores on your lips and the world laughed at you but you were fine. You keep in mind that those people are like angels hiding faces in the dark, or weary old showgirls whose fingernails turned into spiders long ago. ..."
pretty much my favorite part. i'd like to hear the audio version, i'll probably be so taken aback by your voice not being how i expected it be that i won't listen - but i'll listen again. still wondering as to the intent..? haha this definitely leaves me with questions.

Justina Pine

karkrii_vamprium_denied

Written Mar 31 2009, 02:15 PM in "Like lights in the Dark,..."

we are likefire flys
but i dont think we are the same all the time
no1 shines brighter tho
we just shine differnt.
=)

Andres Visbal

liiberar

Written Jan 21 2009, 08:32 PM in IT. - Four

Uhmm no I think you maaaaasssively misinterpreted. Get your mind out of the gutter! Or at least, into a different gutter. Nice interpretation though, LMAO.

Nathan Andrew James

nathan_nonsense

Written Jan 21 2009, 11:33 AM in IT. - Four

ahhh. okay. i see the anal sex part. hahaha

Andres Visbal

liiberar

Written Jan 21 2009, 12:45 AM in Love on a String

Duh! (:

Nathan Andrew James

nathan_nonsense

Written Jan 17 2009, 02:05 PM in Love on a String

i'm assuming you're gay?

Lauren Twilleager

lashleytwill

Written Jan 15 2009, 11:20 AM in Les vieillards m'ont parlé des miracles

This is really great and while I could just listen to you read it, I would much rather hear you perform it because there is such a huge difference.

twill.