pintsize
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21 years old
Member since Nov 06, 2007
Writes from , United States
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Has written 67 comments.
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I don't want to be rude or anything, but the start seems a little rushed, and cliche.
Like, it was typical of somebody to sound like they didn't understand what they were writing about. Maybe you could look harder to find what you really mean behind it.
The title is also unimpressive, kinda like you had to think strenuously about which way the words would go, and which message you'd like to send. You might think that that is what writing is all about, but it is obvious that you're not such a great writer.
Jain. :*
I hate you, hate you for stealing this off me after I trusted you with it! This is the last time you check my poetry you dirty boot!
Speechless:) You are an amazing writer..... Sweet vocabulary.. I wouldn't change this at all.
Very good I like it alot! I like the descriptions used in this
this is actually really cool
i was thinking about starting a dream folder in my documents.
i think i might do that.
you've inspired mee ;D
i really like the impact your text has.
I like those strong words..it gives a certain impact
woah..
it makes imagination work for a while
Ahhh, what sweet creepiness!
Kudos.
-Chicory