mikemartin_lfs
Michael Martin
25 years old
Member since Nov 28, 2008
Writes from Alexandria, United States
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This is my favorite poem of all that I've read, so far
Thanks..you just gave me another concept I need to get in my head for the rest of my life
So deep, so true, loved it!!!!! Even though I say "what if" all the time it's still really good!
what re you thinking when you made it? it seemed so deep. i like it though:))
i love this ur good and i love the rime sceem but wat if the ??? isent wat at all wat if its when? thats the ??? i stik to wats the pont of knowing wat u will do if u dont know when to do it? the poem was graet keep righting
It is very inspirational,too bad I always ask myself "What If"
But I'll try to change it
"what if" moments are a lot more important then now, given circumstances, "what now" is the better choice. But "what if" means so much more then i feel like you portrayed. Expansion of thought is important, and i hope i'm not offending, but sometimes a "what now" won't suffice. sadness and loneliness are different then suffering, different then desperation. But, the beauty of it is it's an opinion. Life doesn't have an answer, their are no right or wrongs, just perception.
so true....loved it adding it to favorites
~Fight for all of this?
Actually give it a shot?
No...if you're truly ready,
I suppose I should not.~
this was my favorite part :D
