anon_amarth
Spencer H
19 years old
Member since Mar 12, 2009
Writes from Richmond, Canada
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Has written 13 comments.
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"They say dare to dream,
I say dare to wake up.
See what you have, or what you could.
No guides in life, only road signs.
Go here, not there.
Wake up, see what you could have.
or
Dream, in a world where you want everything.
you can't have. "
Beautiful. This was really good. I loved those lines above.
I think many people share this outlook on life, and you finally put it into good words.
^-^
"ask me questions-
tell me lies."
i liked thatt. and hey i feel exactly the same way. i say a lot of those things myself, but i know i'll never actually mean it.
I really like this, I think the First and last stanzas might be my favorite though
"Freedom is found when you embrace hate.
Forgo love.
I have fallen in hate.
And I
love to hate."
i really really liked this poem. those last lines really struck me. super good. ^-^
"Besides the clock's mocking ticks
counting away since you last were together. "
that was a good line/s. i liked this poemm. ^-^
Is there really such a thing as forever?
I'd like to think there is... but then, forever is an awfuly long time.
Another great piece... as usual. This is becoming slightly annoying. WRITE SOMETHING BAD ALREADY.
-B
diffinitly not what i expected when i read the title or the first line.. i like the first few stanzas. the rest not so much, but i that may have been my own bias rather than true dislike of how it was written or the topic. parts of it mereley remind me of someone i am rather unhappy with. but again i really do like the first few stanzas as well as some other lines... grr i wish we could view the works as we make comments so i could be more spesific =P
"The pule is racing through these veins" .. you forget the s in pulse?
it is the truth.. personaly ive grown to resent the word for just these reasons. strong message and put to a very strong if not angry tone. good job.
it seemed more like a lecture than a peom to me, but then i dont get out much.. my knowlage of poetic writting is limited.
ouuuu... again powerful.
up untill the very end it reminds me alot of my own feelings sometimes. we do all we possably can to help those around us, but in the end it leaves us felling no better beucase we end up tied to it. they know we will help without complaint, so we are who they always seek. its a crushing feeling.
is thier supposed to be a religious theme to the whole peace thuogh? or was the end about being crucified not ferfering to religion at all, but rather just linking the act of being crucified to the feelings. like you went from being atlas the strong to having the wieght and responsability finaly crush and crusifie you?
(oh and i do appoligize for poor spelling! =( )