karkrii_vamprium_denied
Justina Pine
18 years old
Member since Mar 30, 2009
Writes from Flames of an Icy Hell, United States
Has read texts.
Has written 87 comments.
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who the hell cares? I mean, nobody remembered it until now anyway, xstop looking at the past as if the future is any better!!
Very good wright! I like the style of this poem
I have to say, for the age, this is pretty strong....
i like your writing...
Great write!!
I like the different aspects of time, and how youv'e used them to portray the main idea of your poem.
GOOD!!!! I like how you write from both points. Its really sweet!!!! and I will count it as a poem!
I like dream poems!! very good!! and the end is soo true!
Hey baby i like this. i be there as so as you can to make you feel better.
I love you