jonnnn
Jon Smith
94 years old
Member since Dec 24, 2008
Writes from Texas, United States
Has read texts.
Has written 20 comments.
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sorted byFirst thing I've posted in a while. Hopefully theres some improvement since my last posts.
Okay deffinitely look for structure, I wrote this a while back but I love to read it. There are a ton of petterns to look for.
I enjoyed writing and editing this. It's my newest poem and I like how it is. I would love some critique though.
I enjoy wiritng peices like these. Although I would love your opinion on what to call it. I've asked a ton of seasoned writers and come up with a few different answers. Who knows?
So this was written, not too long ago. I haven't posted anything in a while. I'm thinking it's different from what I write most. But I'll allow you to decide.
Lyrics, I enjoy calling myself a musician, so everyone on this site seems to be pretty accepting of whatever, and please critique as lyrics, not a poem. Thanks.
This is just something I wrote in class, while thinking of those strange friends or ex-lovers that never seem to let go. Ohh, and I'm sorry if my grammar is off, I'm really working at it.