Why is it I give more feedback than I receive?
I only ask for feedback if I need it,
so please help out every once in a while.
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sorted byAnother assignment, this was to be written in a state of euphoria. This came to me on a cold night when I was blaring music and dancing around on my patio. Yes to me that is euphoria, good music and cold weather.
A revision I had to make for class to my poem Lazy Days In Plastic Play Grass. I think I actually like the revision better. Let me know what you think of it!