laurallamalover
Take A Number
"Fill what is empty, empty what is full.
"There's always another train.
"Fill what is empty, empty what is full.
"There's always another train.
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sorted byIt's been a while. Sorry I haven't been on to comment and such. This isnt really true... like everything I write, I really have no idea where it came from...
Just venting yet again. The only way I could make this seem the least bit poetic was by (dun dun dun) rhyming, so beware. Please cope with my terrible sense of rhythm. also, in the second stanza, "eyes" should be "ears." ahh, if only we could edit...
Very quick write. I am currently in comp design, & had to keep glancing over my shoulder to make sure the teacher wasn't looking. Feel free to critisize, etc. I think it needs some editing (crap ending.) btw, will not be here for a few days as I am going skiing and then to London. I will try to get on when I can.
I wrote this a while ago. I have recently discovered that I am having the worst case of writer's block ever, so have given up trying (for the time being) and resorted to trying to remember some of my old stuff, which, of course, I forgot to back up. Enjoy.