Most of the poetry I write is meant to be performed as a slam poem, and I think seeing it written really deadens it. So I managed to make a sound file out of one of my writes. See what you think!
Jun 20, 12:09 AM
I don't like what I've been seeing lately on Deliric. Read further if you're even remotely connected.
I wish I could put into words how well this went over when I slammed it. I hope it will still be almost as good written. As usual, written in an attempt to show how it's supposed to "sound"...
The sixth and final part of a collection of poems I have gathered that tell a story when put together in the order they were written. ( Yeah, long delay... sorry! This one makes more sense if you reread "IT. - One," as you've probably forgotten how it went by now )
Fourth chapter of the book I'm writing entitled "CAELUM". I haven't posted anything about it for months! Maybe go re-read the first three if you need to. (:
This is another slam. Kind of incorporates a lot of different emotions and concepts, as well as different hypothetical situations. As usual, the punctuation is just to give an idea of how it sounds like.
In February, I posted a couple poems, one of which I was to read at a slam ( which, I might add, went over horribly ). I did not, however, post the second that was to be read, and here it is now, 43 days later, by popular request ( by which I mean, Twill's request ).
So that last one was really... angry. Yes it was real life. Yes, I'm fine now for the most part. Here's the second one --- it's probably the more personal of the two, and the other one was pretty personal to begin with. Again, keep in mind these are meant to be performed. Thus, there are actions and alternative uses of punctuation.