Conan The Destroyer of Worlds (oderwg)

oderwg

Conan The Destroyer of Worlds

15 years old
Member since Apr 04, 2008
Writes from Vancouver, Canada
obsessively depressed expressively repressed writer. (oderw) wtf is the "g" for then?

Anyways, on the advice of one el_scripto, I will continue to pump out poetry while I still have the inner turmoil of my soul, xD. I'm still wondering whether I should post these poems or not, as some of them, are quite personal. If you look carefully though, you can see that no matter what I'm writing, I simply cannot prevent myself from making a simple little rhyme scheme.

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(need help with title)

Apr 13, 01:10 AM in poem,

Something I wrote a long time ago. I recently edited it to improve the rhythm, rhyme etc... I've since submitted it for a school assignment. Tell me what you guys think, and if you deem it worthy of your attention, then please help me think of a title, and share your interpretations with me. Thanks.

What I See

Apr 06, 09:34 PM in depression, dreams,

Something I wrote after several weeks of having depressing dreams. I've since submitted it for an anthology of poetry that my school is making. Hope it makes it. Enjoy. As usual, I welcome anyone's criticism. So please, do comment. I just realized that comment is a noun, and that I told you to comment. If I'm correct, then I was wrong. If anyone would be kind enough to tell me the correct way of saying what I want to say, I'd very much appreciate it.

Somewhere Else

Apr 05, 06:58 PM in despair, desperation, hopelessness,

I suddenly got this idea, and guess what, I went with it. This one isn't supposed to be funny by the way, not like it was with McDonalds ph00d. Is it an accurate reflection of the inner turmoil of my soul? That's up to YOU to decide. Lack of information ftw. Please comment, criticize, whatever. I'm trying to get better, and how can I do that without a few generous haters?

McDonalds ph00d

Apr 04, 09:02 PM in fast, food, funny, satire,

I don't really know what to say about it. It's about McDonalds. Perhaps you can say I'm satrizing... something, it's up to you to interpret the deep philosophical message within. Haha, have fun with it, i know it's not that great. Curse it, attack it, but please DON'T HATE. Simplistic/crappy rhyme scheme, it was written in 2 minutes on impulse. If you take this seriously and judge my writing ability according to this piece, please, I beg of you, DON'T.