emoelmo1
Brandy Parks
17 years old
Member since Sep 02, 2009
Writes from Hurlock, MD, other
Has read texts.
Has written 26 comments.
Um hi Im Brandy....err...I write poetry,not good at that...bye?
Um hi Im Brandy....err...I write poetry,not good at that...bye?
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sorted byPart II of my older poem Unknown. I'm still not quite finish but I said I would post this when I finished some more...Feedback is very much welcome :)
Its bad more or less I am sure but I needed to get it off my chest.....My boyfriend of one year and 1 1/2 months dumped me for no reason, at least none he told me....But anyway before I start thinking about it and crying I would love you hear your feed back and criticism....Thank you.
A friend wanted this to express herself to someone...but she never knew how to so I helped...feedback?
My boyfriend wanted a poem an Im terrifide to let him read this...Please give me feedback :( I really need help!