emoelmo1
Brandy Parks
17 years old
Member since Sep 02, 2009
Writes from Hurlock, MD, other
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Has written 26 comments.
Um hi Im Brandy....err...I write poetry,not good at that...bye?
Um hi Im Brandy....err...I write poetry,not good at that...bye?
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sorted byIve had these dreams sence god knows when :/ I just needed to release some of it. Please tell me what you think Id love to hear the feedback.
I have just been thinking and this has popped into my mind...I find it pointless to worrie about what is to come sense we dont know if its good or bad...But still I seem to do it against my will where as I should worrie about bigger things...Hm...Well this has made me rethink everything entirely different...Let me know what you think please.
Well this is a poem about my uncle whom has passed away. Now its not very good at all, trust me I know. But I like it because it describes our relationship very well. Id love to hear your comments on this and again you dont have to tell me how bad it is, I know. And also a heads up it is short like most of my poetry.
Well this is short and not that good. Was in english class and Im ahead of everyone so I thought of writing a poem about snow for a friend of mine. Please dont be to harsh on the comments heh I havnt wrote in alittle while so its not going to be good.
My friends younger brother wanted a soilder poem so i wrote a little one...didnt really know what to write so it may sound really bad :(
Just in a depressing mood and felt like this for a while. Its short as usal but i think its decent...
Okay this is written by my boyfriend Alex Thomas and I. And personally I dont care if people dont like this...Its something we wrote together. Its one poem Im proud of. Comment if you want.
Okay. This is suppose to be depressing an morbit...Its for a friend of mine who asked me to write something about life...about the false happyness. Its only a peice of it but I would like to know if its decent enough to contiune....Please comment this.