Alison King (nerder5000)

nerder5000

Alison King

21 years old
Member since Feb 20, 2006
Writes from Washington DC, United States
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mymms

I'm not very good at rhyming, but I think i did a good job (thanks to http://www.writeexpress.com/online2.html). If anyone else is wondering, its about this quirky OCD-type thing that makes me have to eat all m+ms in the order of the rainbow.

Opening statement

This is an opening statement for my philosophy class debate on relativism. If you don't know, relativism is the ethical theory that, in a nutshell, the majority is right. I was arguing that it was incorrect. I'm so glad to be back! I don't care if you tear it apart, I'm just posting for the heck of it.

My shadow version 2.0

A revision of a previous poem. I left the other one up so you could compare and contrast, and comment. I tried to make most of the sugesstions fit, and thanks for all of your help. Still, expect a version 3.0. You can see the original at http://www.deliric.com/work/details/work=2425

9 years

Kids can be so mean.

My Shadow

Just something I jotted down, please comment as always so I can improve it.

Life

Comments and (constuctive) critisism welcome so I can make improvements.

This place

I don't often do Haiku, but, let me know what you think.