In February, I posted a couple poems, one of which I was to read at a slam ( which, I might add, went over horribly ). I did not, however, post the second that was to be read, and here it is now, 43 days later, by popular request ( by which I mean, Twill's request ).
So that last one was really... angry. Yes it was real life. Yes, I'm fine now for the most part. Here's the second one --- it's probably the more personal of the two, and the other one was pretty personal to begin with. Again, keep in mind these are meant to be performed. Thus, there are actions and alternative uses of punctuation.
I know I haven't been on for a couple eternities and I'm sorry, blame school projects and a proclivity towards poor organization... anyways. I need to decide upon one out of two slam poems ( meaning they're more meant to be PERFORMED... just a note ) to go with another one I've already chosen. Any help? Here's the first one.
Jan 11 2008, 09:24 PM
My friend thought this sounded a lot like a song when I showed it to her, and I agree. So take note: it's not a song. (:
Jan 11 2008, 04:31 PM
This one's extremely personal, so I'm not allowing any comments. Read if you will. It's rather short.
The fifth part of a collection of poems I have gathered that tell a story when put together in the order they were written.
It's about how some people, you can tell, are just... special in a way. I can always tell when someone didn't get it.
The fourth part of a collection of poems I have gathered that tell a story when put together in the order they were written.
Third chapter of the book I'm writing entitled "CAELUM". Might want to read the first two chapters before getting to this if you haven't already. NOTE: Purposely crappy grammar in Spanish. She's still learning!
Nov 29 2007, 04:49 PM
I think I wrote this during the "Great Crash". It is about two BOYS. And yes, it is fictional.