Naomi Scheel (naomilinn)

naomilinn

Naomi Scheel

16 years old
Member since Feb 14, 2009
Writes from Milwaukee, United States
Has read texts.
Has written 319 comments.
I hope you enjoy the words i write.
I appreciate feedback any day. Positive and negative.I wish to improve.
I will usually tell you which lines of your poem i liked the most. If you could do the same for me, that would be great.
Thanks much!

You should be a kind soul and check out the poems in my 'favorites' and comment them!

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Afraid of Soap

Well this is kind of dumb, but I thought I would post it anyway. Sorry I haven't been commenting anyone else's in while. I'll make sure to get back to that soon, I promise. Please read and comment if you want, thank youu. ^-^

A Nice Sound Effect

I've realized that I begin my poems with "well" quite often, haha. I think(hope) this one is a bit better than my last. Please read and comment ^-^ thaaaanks.

Lights,

I havn't written in a while, and I think I need some more time to get back into the swing of things, but here's something for now. Please read and comment^-^

Play The Liar's Game

I'm not entirely sure about this, couldn't think of a great ending. Anywho, please read and comment ^-^

I'll Take You From Here

Maybe I use the word "now" too often, but that's okay. Please read and comment^-^

Chalk,

Something new. I'm not so sure about this. Please read and comment^-^

Talk Is Cheap

crapp I accidentally deleted it. yeah it's short. please read and comment..thanks ^-^

Perfectly Accidentally Vicious

I think I spelled a couple of those words in the title wrong. Did I? Let me know so I can fix it. Anyhow..please read and comment..^-^

Name Tags, We Don't Need Them

Couldn't think of an ending really, suggestions? Not my best, but um yeah. should be "this silent tone between US". Please read and comment..thanks much^-^

A Better Disguise

This is sort of about two different people and i combined the emotions into one to write this. It's sort of short. But please read and comment, thanks much^-^