miki_luvs_poetry

77 Days

It's not about a boyfriend or anything... It's about a best friend. One that I lost a long time ago because... Well there were a lot of reasons... but one was that I knew she deserved a better friend than me, so I just kind of gave up and we haven't spoken since that day. I've never told anyone why I really stopped talking to her... This poem is just the start of me letting it all out. Comment PLEASE??? Thanks:) oh and title suggestions are kind of desperately needed:)

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erinheartspoems

Written Sep 15 2011, 05:57 PM

Oh mikela this is so beautiful. soso beautiful. I burst into tears from this!!! I'm not sure what to say but that this is one of the best pieces of writing of yours and it's just... it's simply wonderful in every way(:

 Torres

thefallenone

Written Jul 11 2011, 09:10 PM

very very good loved it ^.^ ~add to my favorites~ you had feeling in every word best friends are hard to say good bye to no matter what that is how it is they could of given you hell or make your life happy but in the end still are true friends ^.^

"But on that day I decided I would never let you push me around again"
This part seems like you guys got in a fight? sorry if im not right on that just me thinking

"I'm just saying I hope you have a chance to really, truly be happy"
you are a good friend cuz you still want her to be happy

 Ellis

potentialthreat

Written Jul 11 2011, 02:58 PM

This was so good :) I relate completely! Very sad :(

 scianna

gioscianna

Written Jul 11 2011, 09:00 AM

Personally I don't think there's anything wrong with the title now and I think you writing out what's on your mind is a great outlet and I encourage you to keep it up!