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Spare me

Why? why did I have to die in your eyes? Am I nothing to spare, or a spare? Like a key, That simply. I Can not compare an you, I dare. Stroking your fingers threw her hair, touching her bare. looking inside, lost in the moment, thought that was me for a moment. Back to relize, i'm outside. But inside I, awakes a demon here for your sake. Our love thrives, sex as desired. Love has died. Knifes In the kitchen, walk in an I mention. Denied, Looking lie's straight in it's eye's. Wait for the moment, The perfect time. Him wanting what only he desries. Handcuffs, foreplay, fully flamed. house is on fire. If anyone shall ask me, yes I do have the spare key. But there's no need to renter that door entry. Till death do us part, but no one told him it be this hot.

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 Lottermain

realcoolperson

Written Jul 13 2011, 05:38 PM

This is obviously a great entry, I just think you should have kept the poem inside the poem.. know what I mean? Because it is rather immature to have people read the text before they actually decide to.
Pace yourself! I would have enjoyed this so much more if I could separate the different feelings into paragraphs!