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Missing a Dream

What I do with my free time -- wonder if I'll ever see her...

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 Hyman

silent_tears

Written May 20 2006, 05:26 PM

"But I know your heart belongs to someone you've yet to meet Someday you will be loved" Someday You Will Be Loved- Death Cab For Cutie I know how you feel. Wait and hope. You'll meet her.

 Wayne

ferhatmantar

Written Apr 22 2006, 03:30 PM

missing the love he's never met..that's what i have found fascinating about the poem.

 Jackson

missbow

Written Mar 23 2006, 05:40 AM

excellent poem. i love the question at the beginning and how you answer it through out the rest.

 Guttenfelder

little_goot

Written Mar 05 2006, 10:34 PM

I think this is so beautiful. I think people understate the ability to simply find love.

 Gabryszak

penaltychick42

Written Feb 27 2006, 04:42 PM

I liked the beggining especially, it gave me inspiration to another poem i'm working on. It was a great poem.

 Bailey

lemon

Written Feb 23 2006, 08:28 PM

This is quite powerful, in the few words written. The idea of loss before gain. I really liked this-good write.