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ahshadowrai
Written Feb 25 2006, 08:34 PM
Wonderfully written Dylan, I have read this on the UK forum, just beautifully done......
diamondeyes
Written Feb 24 2006, 11:14 PM
It was beautiful. It gave me shivers. One of those pieces you want to remember, ya know?
el_scripto
Written Feb 24 2006, 03:38 PM
Yeah, I have to agree, great imagery. I liked the contrast in this...the title was so harsh and strong, yet the words were almost sweet and musical when I read them. Great write.
burberrystreet
Wonderful. "Into vowel shaped clouds" is by far my favorite. The imagery, like all have said, is fabulous, it takes no effort to see this. A beautiful piece.