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sandrao
Written Jan 25, 02:02 PM
This is interesting...Is it my turn?~is thought provoking. Yet am thinking i remain undecided bout this bcos d words sealed fate towards d end is simply disorientin..Even pessimistic. Good stuff tho.
naomi
Interesting piece. It feels like it should be rapped or sung. I particularly liked these lines:
Strip me down right to the bone.
Then shatter my heart of stone.
Double check spelling mistakes though. They can be distracting.