orolon

The Blossoming of a Dream

by orolon, Apr 30 2006, 12:37 AM in dreams, life, love,

Ah, to be lonely and hopelessly romantic -- it is the curse of the dreamer.

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frezbo

Written May 12 2006, 04:55 PM

i like this poem alot...i like how the way you wrote was sortof dreamlike in its own way.

Kruse

meandmyself

Written Apr 30 2006, 07:51 AM

I like this one alot. I understand this one completely. I like most of your writing, but this is one of my favorites.

Mclean

stefhy

Written Apr 30 2006, 04:13 AM

Well, I have nothing to say except...Wow! That was excellent. This is actually the third poem I have run into about dreaming (I've been searching for them specifically and I'm so glad to see them. They took forever to find! - which just proves that it's quite original hehe.) I really loved the words you used, I was pulled in right from the beginning when you said 'trespassers'. I'm not quite sure, but it was then that I started being 'wowed' (so to speak). Great job!