What i see

by el_scripto, Feb 18 2006, 09:34 AM in hopeful, kinda, love, sad, too,

Um well...this is another little piece I wrote. And...well..it's hard to describe. You just have to kind of read it.

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nekofrith

Written Apr 18 2006, 09:45 PM

is it... it's not about you is it?

cherryblossom

Written Apr 18 2006, 12:49 AM

Wow, this was really really really well written!!! You've captured the emotion fantastically

effulgenteyes

Written Apr 06 2006, 05:52 PM

amazing.

ahshadowrai

Written Mar 22 2006, 10:21 PM

A bit chilling, ur a wonderful writer hon, please do keep it up.....

missbow

Written Mar 19 2006, 03:15 PM

excellent piece of writing.

loverboy

Written Mar 18 2006, 08:26 PM

feel my love. why am i so emo? sad, ....

blackconverse

Written Mar 05 2006, 07:49 AM

wow... i saw it and i thought it was too long to read because i was feeling a little lazy, but i did read it and it was amazing! really good! so sad, but so truthful

the_end

Written Feb 27 2006, 06:11 PM

That gave me goosebumps.

watersong

Written Feb 26 2006, 12:34 PM

love it, love it, love it. it's sooo sad! excellent job... it touched me deeply

ancientsong

Written Feb 22 2006, 05:50 PM

love it it touched me so sad truth is harsh, but in the end, lies are harsher