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"I don't see MY initials on wristbands or cars, or MY name on a plaque in the hall... Because to everyone else I'm still just a kid, my death changed nothing at all..." I loved this part...because it is so true. Only certain people are remembered as heros and victims and perfect people who deserve their memory etched in stone and on jerseys. It is terribly sad that others get pushed into the background because they weren't popular enough or cool enough or great enough. I'm sorry it had to happen to him...
I dunno...kinda confusing. I think it needs to be tweaked a bit, but the idea is interesting, and I think, could be great. Keep it up. =)
christian
wow..so sad and woa It was just so sad I love it! great job!!!