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ahshadowrai
Written Dec 01 2007, 02:00 PM
"Lingering under
way down deep below
is hidden a truth
no one wants to show
The world is on fire
and secretly we're singed
for concealing compassions
we hide deep within"
Your write is so very true B2R
I think you're an amazin' poet
and look forward to reading all your works *^_^*
ya_sucks
Written Nov 30 2007, 05:03 PM
Chin up, the world will never change for you :)
Nice write btw :)
thebleed
great poem and i can relate i feel that 2 sometimes