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erbarker
Written Feb 19 2006, 05:22 PM
This poem brought tears to my eyes. So powerful. I love a twisted end, but this was more like a tornado. Excellent write.
ahshadowrai
Written Feb 19 2006, 03:37 PM
LOL, An awesome job of reminising, sure took me back only "Tommy" was "Andy" thanx, this meant a lot...........
meghna
Written Feb 19 2006, 12:43 AM
Reflects, very well, the irony of the adolescence.....a time when boys build their self esteem ............ and girls lose theirs, to boys. Simple, elegant and deep.
cre8iveone
Written Feb 18 2006, 04:33 PM
I like the transition from then to now. Very impactful. I enjoyed it.
thefixion
I loved the ending, kinda tied it all together, and tied it all up.. i just got tired leading up to it, lol.. but yeah, nice read