"Like lights in the Dark,..."

by liiberar, Dec 16 2007, 06:39 PM in hope,

It's about how some people, you can tell, are just... special in a way. I can always tell when someone didn't get it.

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tammihartley

Written Jun 17 2010, 01:04 PM

can totally relate! nice poem :)

chiyan

Written Apr 15 2010, 07:01 AM

loved it from the title to the end

ruben92b

Written Jan 05 2010, 07:14 PM

Loved it

"Like lights in the Dark,
we are small and flickering
( some shining very brightly through ) the pathways
and like fireflies"

favorite line ^^

redrockingchair

Written Dec 14 2009, 08:53 PM

very beautiful poem. very good ending verse :D

karkrii_vamprium_denied

Written Mar 31 2009, 02:15 PM

we are likefire flys
but i dont think we are the same all the time
no1 shines brighter tho
we just shine differnt.
=)

frezbo

Written Mar 19 2008, 02:40 AM

beautiful :) i love your use of brackets and repitition!!

cinders_ella

Written Dec 18 2007, 01:47 AM

This is one of your poems-
that you see the emotions in.

pintsize

Written Dec 16 2007, 11:24 PM

Creates wonderful images. Think this'll have to be favorited..

blackconverse

Written Dec 16 2007, 08:33 PM

soo overall, i thought the entire thing was incredible howeverrrr i don't know why but the line "spilling chains of hearts out of takeaway paper cups and onto each other's laps" really stands out to me. so that was my favorite line but the whole thing is going int omy favorites : )

bittersweet

Written Dec 16 2007, 07:40 PM

that was great, drew.
Really really awseome.
I loved how you compared humans to fireflys, and how we all have a light.
Though i disagree that some peoples light shines brighter than other's, they just all shine in a differant way.